Our hostess and I have been
friends for almost as long as we’ve been writing erotica, although we first met
doing a signing for a non-erotic fantasy anthology called Such a Pretty Face: Tales of Power and Abundance (edited by Lee
Martindale.) We’ve both kept on writing erotica, but for this blog post I
thought it might be useful to discuss the editorial side of the writing/publishing
equation.
I edit mostly lesbian erotica,
usually for Cleis Press (six anthologies published, one in the pipeline, and
one more still taking submissions—you can find the guidelines at http://sacchi-green.blogspot.com,) and sometimes LGBTQ speculative fiction for
Lethe Press. I’ll describe the technical parts of editing down the page a bit,
but you might be more interested what I look for in erotic short stories, so
here are a few pieces of advice, most of them applicable to pretty much any
genre of short fiction.
1) Tell a story as only you can
tell it. Be familiar with other writing in your genre, but don’t imitate anyone
else. I look for an original approach and a distinctive voice; something to set
a story apart from all the thousands I’ve seen before. Surprise me!
2) Make your characters so real
that the reader can tell them apart just by the way they act and speak, even
when you don’t specify who’s speaking. This is especially important with
same-sex couples; you can only use pronouns like “she” or “her” a few times in
a row before nobody can tell who’s saying or doing what to whom. And don’t be
reluctant to use their names when necessary to distinguish them.
3) Pay attention to the rhythm
of your prose. Vary the length and structure of your sentences (unless, of
course, you use short, choppy sentences or long, rambling ones to make a
certain point or define a character.) Try reading your work out loud.
4) Don’t assume that grammatical
constructions you see over and over must be correct, or should be used over and
over. There’s no need for sentence after sentence, or even paragraph after
paragraph, to begin with a participial phrase such as “Opening the door, she
crossed the room.” Think about that. Is the room so small one could cross it
while still in the process of opening the door? There are other more varied
ways of avoiding too many sentences that start with “she” or the character’s
name.
5) PLEASE be sure you know
whether your character’s movements and actions are physically possible. I’m not
talking about superhuman endurance; I’m just considering logistics. Remember
whose various parts are where, and don’t tie the reader’s mind in knots trying
to figure out how what was up is suddenly down, and why what faced one
direction (and was, in fact, tied down that way) is suddenly available for full
frontal play. Interrupting the flow of a sex scene is especially, well,
frustrating.
6) Use just as much explicit
detail as is necessary to elicit the response you’re after. No more, no less.
Even in erotica the sex scenes are only one element, however major, in a story
that should include characterization and some sort of story arc that makes the
ending proceed naturally from the beginning.
7. Pay attention to what you
think the editor wants, but not so much that you don’t write the way you really
want to. I’ve rejected pieces by some good writers who finally sold to me when
they stopped trying to be too “nice” and dug down into what they really needed
to say, however dark.
8. Don’t pay too much attention
to anything I’ve said above. Other editors will have other tastes and opinions,
and yes, it really is a crap shoot of sorts.
Back to the job of an anthology editor, for those who might
be thinking of trying that. My major advice along those lines is to get your
own work into so many publications that good writers are familiar with your
work and trust you to handle theirs well.
An anthology editor isn’t the
same as a line or copy editor, although I do a fair bit of that before turning
in a manuscript. What I do as an editor is: a. Pitch a theme to a publisher. b.
Get it (sometimes) approved. c. Circulate my call for submissions and answer questions
about the guidelines. d. Read and select submissions, conferring with writers
on editorial changes if necessary. e. Send out conditional acceptances and (the
worst part) rejections. f. Assemble and polish the final manuscript, including my
introduction. g. Submit the manuscript. h. Wait, possibly for several months,
for the publisher’s formal acceptance; mine have the final say on each part. i.
Wait many more months for publication, meanwhile fielding and suggesting more
minor changes on preliminary galley proofs, and standing up for your writers
whenever you can. j. Publicize the book when it comes out, which includes
begging for reviews by any means possible. Well, I haven’t yet offered home
made cookies, but I’m seriously considering it.
Why did decide to become an
editor? Well, when I was a kid the other kids assumed that I’d be a teacher
when I grew up, just because I was obnoxiously smart and wore glasses and was
somewhat socially inept. I was determined NEVER to be a teacher. Maybe editing
satisfies a repressed need to correct term papers after all--as long as they’re
sexy term papers.
Bio:
Sacchi Green’s stories have appeared in a hip-high stack of publications.
She’s also edited nine erotica anthologies, most recently Wild Girls, Wild Nights: True Lesbian Sex Stories, available on
Amazon and at http://www.cleispress.com/book_page.php?book_id=542. Seven of her books, including Wild Girls, have been Lambda Literary
Award Finalists, and one, Lesbian Cowboys,
was a Lambda Winner. She hangs out on Facebook and at http://sacchi-green.blogspot.com. You can also contact her at sacchigreen@gmail.com.
Hi, Sacchi,
ReplyDeleteYou might tell authors to disregard all of the above, but my advice as an editor dovetails almost completely with yours. The one other thing I'd mention - though you would think it wouldn't bear mentioning - Follow the instructions in the submission guidelines! Each of has quirks in terms of preferred formats. An author who ignores my explicit instructions tells me that he or she really doesn't care very much. Or else he/she is so haphazard about details that I probably wouldn't want to work with that author anyway.
Hi Sacchi, Marvelous post, and so very, very useful for writers and editors alike. You've always been a delight to work with, whenever you've accepted one of my stories. Now I better get working on a story for your next antho, and hope that you like it.
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